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Feelings escalating
Blood racing through my veins
Putting all my strength into
Breaking free from these chains

Heart is pounding faster
Fear invades my mind
Adrenaline pumps through me
My abilities confined

I can't escape
There's no way out
My instincts
I start to doubt
Falling down
Breathing deep
A sudden rush
And I'm asleep.
©2006-2009 ~Matt-Bellamy-Lover
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I wrote this ages ago but I found it and quite liked it. It's about blacking out incase you don't guess!

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:iconsilvawen:
Wow... that's powerful...

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Never miss second breakfast!

"Eleka nahmen nahmen ah tum ah tum eleka nahmen..."
~ No Good Deed, Wicked the Musical
:iconmatt-bellamy-lover:
Thankyou! :D

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If you open up your mind too much, your brain will fall out.
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I don't know if you made it while listening the song but It has this sorta "Agitated" feel to it. One small critique ( hey , sou said critiques welcome ) : The forth verse and the third break the rythm .. It all seems to be very fast in the two verses but those kinda slow it down . But nice song/poem.

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January 10, 2006
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